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Take two steps back,
rewind the time.
I can't move forwards when you are now so far behind.
Shake it off,
it won't go away.
I can't move forwards when you are on my mind again.
Step back again,
it's yesterday.
I can't move forwards when you are in so much pain.
Caught between this,
and what it was.
I can't move forwards when you are still so captivating.
It wasn't simple,
still isn't today.
I can't move forwards when you are so damn casual.
I can't move,
I can't breathe.
I can't move forwards when you are not by my side.
I just wrote?I don't know what it's meant to be...
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DaveyLeeDepp Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2007
Totally cloying. You perfectly formed a cage, which sounds like desperation. The promise of salvation just out of reach. It sounds so sad and alone, left wanting... It's a very nice piece of writing... Thank you for sharing it!
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AndieLovelly Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2007
Chaw ben..
That comment was way f00king better than what I wrote LMAO.
ILY boy :)
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DaveyLeeDepp Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007
Haha! I think you insult your writing thus... :-p Hehe... hmmm.. I think it's about time I submitted something myself... Meh... maybe when I get those New Year's pictures back, if any came out good...

ILY, ILY!! <3 <--- (it's a double scoop ice cream, donch'a know?)
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AndieLovelly Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2007
You are insane my love..
I don't insult,
I just judge strongly >.<
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TyraMcKinnon Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2006
I like this. Really do.
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AndieLovelly Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2006
Awww thanks bon
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